2010-08-25 [Aeolynn]: poses look more natural, and they both look a lot happier

2010-09-24 [pegasus1000]: New

2010-09-24 [Aeolynn]: the angle of the face seems a bit awkward to me... and the size is a little too small

2010-09-24 [Chel.]: I think the foreshortening needs some work. Did you use a reference? It may help.

2010-09-25 [pegasus1000]: I used a REALLY old art book. Foreshortening is something I am still working on. Thanks.

2010-09-25 [Chel.]: Outstretched legs and arms towards the camera were always the hardest :[

2010-10-01 [Ravendust]: This isn't a bad piece of art, a few things that could be worked on, but all in all pretty decent :)

Feet and hands were always the hardest thing for me to draw- still are. I try to shortcut whenever I can to get out of doing anything with them- not the best solution to the problem^^;;

2010-10-02 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: I agree on the feet and hands. They are always hard todraw, and take a lot of practice to be able to get them down just right. I still have a hard time with them even.
I like her pose, it's very relaxed. Same goes for the colors.
Her neck is bothering me though too, you have pulled too far forward. I think if you erased some of the jaw line and had the neck line go up a little further, it'd look more natural.

2010-10-03 [pegasus1000]: I drew the Face first and then decided on the pose. By then it was to late to fix the neck.

2010-10-24 [pegasus1000]: New. The scanner really over flashed this one

2010-10-25 [Aeolynn]: I really like the wings, but the pose is a bit too generic for my taste... also the head is tiiiiiny, try making that a little larger. If you look at her shoulder, then her head, they appear the same size, head is bigger!

2010-10-25 [Pnelma Tirian]: the pose and clothwork are great! But I have to agree with Aeo, that head and hand--so tiny!

2010-10-25 [pegasus1000]: This was one of my first profile poses. But I like the comments so far.

2010-10-25 [Eyonic]: I'd have to agree as well, the head does seem a tad bit small. the way i learned to do the proportion of the head to body is that the body is usually 5-6 heads tall :/

2010-10-27 [Ravendust]: Gorgeous wings, and the pose is well done, though as others have said her head is tiny.

2010-11-08 [pegasus1000]: New

2010-11-08 [Eyonic]: I am confused about the light blue part behind the tail..

2010-11-09 [pegasus1000]: I didn't want a white background so I went for a "watery" blue.

2010-11-09 [Aeolynn]: i think eyonic is talking about the blue fin thing, doesn't look like its attached to the tail

2010-11-09 [pegasus1000]: oh. I thought the tail needed more to it then the dark blue part.

2010-11-10 [Eyonic]: ah okay